Sunday, October 21, 2007

Balance Haiku

Bike Riding

On the brink of six
bicycle proves difficult
balance eludes him


frustration finds him
overwhelming confidence
the training wheels stay

1877 Bridge

river flows past me
paddle splashes quietly
soul achieves balance


For an update on the bike riding click here.
Find more haiku here.

I missed the deadline for ODB on this, but decided to post it anyway.


self taught artist said...

i like this! good Haiku

Shelley said...

Kind of cool to see this the day after he managed to banish training wheels forever!

Chelle said...

Shelley - I have to admit that your post reminded me that I hadn't posted this.