On the brink of six
bicycle proves difficult
balance eludes him
frustration finds him
overwhelming confidence
the training wheels stay
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river flows past me
paddle splashes quietly
soul achieves balance
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bicycle proves difficult
balance eludes him
frustration finds him
overwhelming confidence
the training wheels stay
**********************
river flows past me
paddle splashes quietly
soul achieves balance
********************
3 comments:
i like this! good Haiku
Kind of cool to see this the day after he managed to banish training wheels forever!
Shelley - I have to admit that your post reminded me that I hadn't posted this.
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