Sunday, October 21, 2007

Balance Haiku

Bike Riding

On the brink of six
bicycle proves difficult
balance eludes him

Frustration

frustration finds him
overwhelming confidence
the training wheels stay

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1877 Bridge

river flows past me
paddle splashes quietly
soul achieves balance

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For an update on the bike riding click here.
Find more haiku here.

I missed the deadline for ODB on this, but decided to post it anyway.

3 comments:

self taught artist said...

i like this! good Haiku

Shelley said...

Kind of cool to see this the day after he managed to banish training wheels forever!

Chelle said...

Shelley - I have to admit that your post reminded me that I hadn't posted this.